Sunday, 29 November 2015

Drafting and planning

I have been planning my article for my double page spread and have come up with an exciting opening paragraph!

"Some would say Birmingham is not an easy place to love, or a place many people long to visit. But the current reinvention of the city is attracting more and more people, not just in the UK but internationally. #Insight have been talking to the much loved blogger Eilish Hardy all about the best places to visit for great nightlife in Brum."

What I like about my opening paragraph is that it is informal, it will make the reader feel at ease. It sums up what the interview is going to be about, it sticks to the point and will definitely entice the readers, making them want to find out where the nightlife is good in Brum!


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